Welcome to the first week of the Spring Writing Challenge!
We’re so excited to get started on these stories. It’s time to roll up your sleeves, set your fingers on your keyboard, and get writing. Will your story contain aliens? A prince in disguise? Maybe even a sweet summer romance? Whatever happens, we can’t wait to see what you come up with!
So, without further ado, here’s your very first prompt!
Week One Prompt – The Dialogue Prompt
“If you know something bad is going to happen, do you have to try and stop it?”
“I just got here.”
Wait…what’s a dialogue prompt?
A dialogue prompt is a conversation between two characters. It doesn’t matter who says it, or if it takes place in the beginning, middle, or end of your story. However, one character must say the first sentence, and the second character must respond with the second sentence.
Before you start writing, there are some important rules to follow.
Writing Rules
1. Please keep the content of the stories you post to a PG rating. Please avoid real curse words. Violence/fighting should be limited and purposeful. Please do not include any spice. Moderators may remove stories and comments for any reason at any time. Moderators may remove any member from the challenge at any time.
2. Your story must be 1,000 words or less, and must contain the prompt to be counted for the challenge. You’re not required to post it in order to “win” the challenge, but if you want it to count for your team, your story must be posted by Sunday at 11:59 PM ET, and you must include your team name.
It’s time to post your story as a comment down below! We can’t wait to see all the fun directions you guys take this dialogue prompt. If you have any questions, feel free to email us at info@writers.company!
Happy Writing!
Ava,
Your story was very well written! I enjoyed reading it! 👏
Melissa
Ooh, what a fun story, girl! Fantastic job!
Wow, this is beautifully written!
I love your writing style!
Wow, I’m very impressed. The worldbuilding here feels grounded and real, the characters fleshed out, and the prompt just flows so smoothly with the rest of the narrative. Great story here!
I hope this part of something larger. I was totally sucked in.
Thanks for sharing your work. 🙂 Enjoyable read.
great opening line!
Beautiful story! Great job!
Absolutely loved it
i NEED the rest of this asap! i would love this as a book series. its excellent! The world-building is so good. you did a great job. i especially love how the characters are already full of the knowledge of the world and there is no need for any one character to outright explain things. again, have i expressed how i literally want this in my life so much!
Great details! I was brought right into the world you built!
Such a fun story! Loved the comical banter between characters
Team 1
My heart thumped in my chest. A bead of cold sweat slipped down my neck, between my shoulder blades. The vial gripped within my palm suddenly felt like a lead ball, the weight of the entire Resistance movement resting on my shoulders.
Breathe, just breathe.
I looked past the rows of research techs and engineers, through the blue holographic monitor screens. Beyond them, a panel slid back, revealing a silvery sheen that was all that stood between us and the Cache, an orange mini galaxy of data points.
“Please!” Luke’s cry drew my gaze.
A shiver ran down my spine as the guards at the head of the room forced him towards the panel with their rifles. Six inches from a mindless imprisonment that I knew would never end.
It could have been me down there. It still could be if they realized Luke was my contact with the Resistance. That he’d gotten to me before they’d arrested him. That I held his weapon in my hand right now.
They forced Luke back another step. I bit my tongue to keep from crying out as his flesh passed through the silver light… and came out the other side as a sea of stars. A painless process, and reversible, so the government didn’t have an issue with it. But boy was it mesmerizing.
I dropped into my chair, fingers humming across the keyboard. My eyes locked on the charts, pretending to check the data points as it pulled Luke into the Helios system. I could almost hear the clock ticking against me. They wouldn’t wait to run an analysis; they’d want to discover everything the Resistance knew. Within fifteen minutes, I’d be marked a threat, they’d realize we knew Helios’ potential to exploit and brainwash the public, and the Resistance’s plan to destroy it would be public.
Except Luke was supposed to destroy it. He was the bold one, after all.
I could still feel his hands gripping my shoulders. The frantic look in his eyes as he spilled out everything faster than I could think. “Once they add me to the Cache, you’ll have minutes before every one of our operatives is marked. The only way to stop Helios is to dump that virus into the Cache.”
“So take it with you!”
“I can’t. They’ll search me.” He drew in a sharp breath. “Helios goes live tomorrow. Jade, you are our only shot. Get in there, dump out the vial, and run.”
Run. Yes, running sounded like a great idea. I could be safely away from this place in the next five minutes. Safely vanished.
“You alright?”
I jumped, pulling my hands away from my face. My coworker, Gary, dropped into the chair beside me, late as usual. His hair stood up in every direction.
I shook my head. “If you know something bad is going to happen, do you have to try and stop it?”
“I just got here,” he laughed. “I need at least two hours and another coffee before you can ask me a question like that.”
I rolled my eyes. Should have known better than to seek wisdom there.
Below, the observation area cleared out, leaving me a clear path to the panel. I glanced around the room. The captivating potential of new data had already cast its net over the other employees. They wouldn’t even notice me.
I rose from my seat, plunging my hand into my pocket. The fate of the Resistance depended on this.
“Hey,” Gary garbled through a mouthful of coffee. “Where are you going?”
My hands shook. I spoke, but words didn’t come. I forced out a whisper. “I thought I saw something.”
No one challenged me. Bold. Be bold.
Ten feet, eight feet, six feet.
Someone laughed and I whipped my head around as a group of scientists joined me. This was it. They knew. But I was just three feet away!
One of the directors stopped right beside me, her gaze falling into the scene as star after star appeared on the other side of the wall, darting off to join the rest in the Cache. A million blooms of light.
“I never get used to the view,” she mused. “Don’t you agree…” her eyes flicked to my badge, “Jade?”
I licked my lips. “Uh huh.”
My name. She knew my name, she saw my face, she could pinpoint me here if asked!
My heartbeat washed through my ears like rapid-fire. What if they tracked me down? What if I couldn’t escape?
I blinked and in that single moment envisioned myself stepping forward, opening the vial, and thrusting its contents into the Cache. I’d turn and run, fighting through anyone who got in my way.
My eyes opened again and they filled with the cluster of orange stars that had been Luke’s punishment… and could still be mine.
I told myself to pull out the vial. Now was the time.
Nothing happened. I couldn’t breathe.
Run.
I had ten minutes. Ten minutes to get out of here and save myself from joining Luke. But wait, how long had I been sitting at my desk?
One of the computers pinged nearby and my skin crawled thinking it might be a notification about me. I needed a distraction, something to take their attention away from the data for a few extra minutes.
I pulled out the vial and thrust it in the director’s direction. “One of the techs asked me to add this to the system,” the words burst out. “I don’t know what it is, but I think it could be a threat to Helios.”
Her brows knit together, assessing me. But her fingers closed around the vial, pulling it gently from my hand. The weight rolled off my shoulders.
“Right,” I straightened. “Let me know what you find.”
I walked back to my workstation, stopping beside it. Casting a glance over my shoulder, I waited until the director looked away.
I scrambled out the door.
Good tension and world building!
To Change the World, by Ava Murbarger
P.S.- sorry I missed the meeting, we were out of town. I hope to be at the next one!!
The sky was bleeding again.
Rust-colored clouds hung over the City like bruises, pulsing faintly. Rael kept her eyes fixed on them, one hand on the rail of the Watchers’ Tower. Her gloves were too thin. The steel was cold enough to bite.
Behind her, a door creaked open.
“You’re late,” she said without turning.
Boots scraped against the stone. A new recruit, probably. They sent one every week now. Fresh eyes, fresh loyalty.
“I got lost,” the boy said. He sounded too young to carry the badge. Too soft to hold a blade. “Sorry.”
She turned and looked at him.
Dust-colored coat, too long in the sleeves. Wide eyes. Not from the City, then. One of the Outer Rings. Maybe even farther. She sighed.
“If you know something bad is going to happen,” she said, “do you have to try and stop it?”
The boy blinked. “I just got here.”
“Well, obviously.” She crossed her arms.
He shifted nervously on his feet.
Rael turned back to the cityscape. “The answer is yes, by the way. At least, if you’re cursed with a conscience.”
He joined her at the rail. Together they watched the distant flicker of drones weaving patterns in the smog. A red warning rune glowed briefly on the horizon, then faded. Rael knew what it meant. The Reclamation Agents were moving again. Soon, another neighborhood would vanish.
“Why do you do this?” the boy asked.
She laughed without humor. “Because no one else will. Because the High Council stopped caring two winters ago. Because someone has to.”
A long pause. Then, “Is it true the Watchers can see the future?”
“We read the signs,” she said. “Patterns in weather. Seismic anomalies. Political shifts. The Council says it’s superstition.” She paused. “But when the streets burn exactly seven hours after the rats vanish, over and over again, you stop calling it chance.”
He was silent. Good. Maybe he was listening.
“You said you got lost. But you still came up here. Why?”
“I heard the bells.” He hesitated. “They said you can’t hear them unless you’re meant to.”
Rael glanced at him. The brass bell on the tower hadn’t rung in years. She narrowed her eyes.
“Name?”
“Wren.”
“That’s not your real name.”
“It is now.”
She smirked. “Fine, Wren. Welcome to Watcher’s Hill. Welcome to the losing side.”
Another alarm rune lit the smog. Closer this time.
Rael pulled her scope from her belt and scanned the eastern edge of the city. “Sector Four. They’re burning the food lines again.”
“That’s the second time this week,” Wren said quietly.
She lowered the scope. “Third.”
He didn’t speak for a long time. Then he said, “My sister was there.”
Rael’s fingers tightened around the rail. She didn’t ask if the girl had survived. That wasn’t the kind of world they lived in anymore.
Instead, she reached into her coat and handed Wren a folded map, inked with lines and red X’s.
“There’s a storm tunnel under the old trainyard,” she said. “It’s not on any schematics, and it’ll get you to Sector Four faster than any street. But it’s dark. And crawling.”
Wren took the map with trembling fingers. “Why are you helping me?”
Rael looked at him, really looked. The wide eyes weren’t wide with fear, not completely. It was fire. Just hidden under the ash.
“Because sometimes the only thing worse than seeing the future,” she said softly, “is doing nothing to change it.”
Wren nodded. His jaw set. “Then I’ll go.”
Rael watched as he turned, vanishing back into the tower’s dark. When the door slammed shut behind him, the bell gave a soft chime. Just once.
And far below, the wind began to shift.