Welcome to the second week of the Spring Writing Challenge!
You all did so well with your stories last week! There were so many interesting and unique ways you interpreted the prompt. It’s now the second week, so it’s time to do it again! Will your story take place in the past? In space? Underground? Whatever you decide, we can’t wait to see how you use this prompt.
So, without further ado, here’s your next prompt!
Week One Prompt – The Setting Prompt
Write a story that takes place in a
Forbidden Garden
Wait…what’s a setting prompt?
A setting prompt is a prompt that takes place in a specific setting. It doesn’t matter who’s there, what happens, or what’s said. The only thing that matters is that your story must take place in a forbidden garden.
Before you start writing, we have some important rules for you to follow.
Writing Rules
1. Please keep the content of the stories you post to a PG rating. Please avoid real curse words. Violence/fighting should be limited and purposeful. Please do not include any spice.
2. Your story must be 1,000 words or less, and must contain the prompt to be counted for the challenge. You’re not required to post it in order to “win” the challenge, but if you want it to count for your team, your story must be posted by Sunday at 11:59 PM ET, and you must include your team name.
Remember to scroll all the way to the bottom of the page and post your story as an “answer” to this question. 🙂 You’re all doing such a great job!
Happy Writing!
Team 1! Sorry if there are typos or grammar mistakes, I’m posting this a minute before the deadline haha <3
When my brother became king, he sealed all entrances to the palace garden. He put his best guards around the perimeter and ordered anyone who strayed close to the entrance to be arrested.
My brother was only in that garden for minutes on the fateful day he watched my parents die, but his eyes are now hollow, his once chocolate brown hair streaked with gray. He told me, and I honestly can’t recall if he has spoken to me since, that he would die before letting another person set foot in that garden.
I pull my hood tighter around my head as the frigid wind bites my cheeks. I have no desire to be the reason for my brother’s death, but my need for answers is becoming suffocating.
Tonight, the moon hides behind the clouds, helping me stay undetected. I zig-zag between the shrubbery that once lined the path to the garden. The guards around the perimeter have become more lax with the rotations since no one has yet tried to break in.
I hide behind a bush and count sixty seconds between when a guard disappears around the corner and another one comes into view. I try to relax my muscles while I wait for the next thirty-second gap. When no guards are in view, I run towards the garden hedge and push off the ground to jump. In the split second I’m in the air, I realize the hedge is taller than I remember. I ungracefully land somewhere in the middle, grasping wildly for purchase.
I’ve almost managed to make it almost to the top when the next guard rounds the corner. My traitorous body freezes in fear, fingers going slack. The guard doesn’t see me until he’s right below my perch. I watch my presence register on his face, but manage to keep my grip. I swing my legs over to the other side as the guard opens his mouth to sound an alarm.
I hit the ground ungracefully, rolling onto my back. Then I’m up and running. I’m not sure if the guards will try to chase me, but I’m not taking any chances.
As a child, I found gardens tedious and stuffy due to the parties of that sort my parents hosted here. Now, I wished I’d spent more time in the garden as I blindlessly race through it.
After putting a good distance between me and where I climbed over the wall, I pause to catch my breath. The palace garden is essentially a maze, somewhere designed for people to become lost in.
For the first time, the layout seems sinister, not romantic. A chill creeps down my spine as I take in my surroundings. The tall hedges are healthy and pruned, even though my brother had the gardeners relocated after his declaration. The leaves are so green they appear black, and instead of the colorful flowers I remember, glowing silver blossoms adorn the hedges.
What happened here?
The flowers start to slowly grow, their petals reaching toward me. I back away, blinking. And that’s when the music registers.
I’d thought it was the wind in my ears as I ran, but there’s a haunting melody floating through the air. It seems to grow louder after I acknowledge it.
Ignoring the fear in my gut, I start following the sound. I’m here for answers, and this impossible song seems like a good start.
I always try to be brave, but this garden is haunting. Vines strewn the ground, and some are splattered with red. All I can think about is my parents and how they spent their last moments here. Was it quick? Were they scared? I feel nauseous.
The music is now so loud it’s almost deafening. It doesn’t occur to me to think about how I know exactly which path to follow, and how the music seems to be tethered to me, reeling me in.
Suddenly, I come to a clearing. In the center, was something that tugged at a childhood memory. A wishing well.
I approach the well in a daze, ears ringing and eyes stinging from the blindly bright flowers. I came here as a child several times, but only made a wish once.
“Careful,” my parents had said. “The well can only hold so many of your wishes before it takes in return.”
I lean over the edge, a terrible feeling crawling up my throat, causing my earlier nausea to return. The water in the well is splashing about, and there, in the waves, I can make out the resemblances of my parents’ faces.
I reel back, horrified. My legs give way, but the well is pulling me closer again. I fall against its rim, shutting my eyes so I can’t see the water.
In one terrible moment, the melody morphs into a voice.
“Elora. I’ve been waiting for you.”
Forgotten Memories by Leah Criss (Team 1)
Roses pale and withered hung from bushes grown wild from neglect. A single apple tree stood in a corner. No fruit hung from its spindly branches. Any flowers on the ground were long gone. Stones lay cracked and broken along what once were walls of intricately cut stonework. A finely wrought tarnished gate that once would have been called beautiful hung broken on its hinges.
Most people in town avoided the garden. No one ever gave a reason why. They stared at it, shook their heads at the state of the garden, and moved past without another thought. One or two considered fixing it themselves before quickly discarding the idea. The one thing everyone agreed on was never enter the garden.
This was the way things had been as long as Jen and Tanner had been alive. Yet, on a chilly spring day, the two of them found themselves outside the garden gate.
Tanner peered through the gate. “Some of the roses have already bloomed.”
Jen looked around nervously. “No one enters that garden,” she whispered.
He ignored her as his eyes widened as he noticed the type of roses growing on the bushes. They were Jen’s favorite. “New Dawn roses.” He pointed and with a determined set of his jaw started towards the gate.
“Wait!” She frantically waved at him to come back.
Tanner ignored her and passed through the gates.
Jen closed her eyes and said a prayer. Counting to ten, she opened them. He was still standing there staring at her from the other side of the gate. His mouth moved but she could barely hear anything.
“What did you say?”
A quizzical look crossed his face. He said something back. She would have to get closer. In spite of her misgivings, Jen soon found herself past the gate by Tanner’s side. “I couldn’t hear what you were saying.”
“Welcome to the garden, Jen and Tanner. I didn’t expect to see either of you here”
Both of them jumped in alarm. Who spoke? Casting her eyes around wildly, her gaze finally landed on a woman standing behind them.
“Mrs. Riels?” Tanner asked as he angled himself to stand slightly between Jen and her.
“I’m sorry to frighten you. I was just passing by and noticed you entering the garden. Something none in this town have dared to do in years.”
Tanner crossed his arms. “Why is the garden forbidden?”
“It’s not the garden that’s forbidden. It’s the memories here that the town wanted to forget.” Mrs. Riels grew quiet and walked over to a stone slab on the ground.
“Why does the entire town avoid this place?”
“Has no one told you the story?”
Jen and Tanner shook their heads. Mrs. Riels frowned.
“I don’t understand,” Jen said. “Were you the gardener?”
“Heavens, no. But you two want answers, and it seems that I may be the only one in the town willing to provide them.”
Jen and Tanner looked at her expectantly.
“This garden holds memories. Twenty years ago, this garden was in full bloom. It was the highlight of the town no matter the season. A few young children who had lived in the town all their lives were here at the time.” She stared off into the distance, a haunted memory in her eyes. “The thunderstorm was sudden, and they needed shelter. Hoping the garden was better than nothing, they sought refuge here when a tornado hit and destroyed the garden and the nearby house.”
Tanner filled the silence with more questions. “Why not build a memorial instead of letting this place fall into neglect?”
“What happens when memories are too painful to remember?” Mrs. Riels challenged. “The garden’s very existence is a memorial.” She tapped the stone slab in front of her.
Looking closer, Jen and Tanner could see the words chiseled into the stone.
In memory of Bella Pots, Grant Steele, Henry Smith, and Sarah Riels.
“What else happened here that everything in the garden would be in such a state of decay?”
“The tornado left the garden in scattered pieces. Some plants survived. That lone apple tree in the corner made it. The wall did not. The gate was left to the elements. For a time we considered repairing what was broken, but no one could face it. How could we look at so much beauty and be reminded of the lives we lost?” Mrs. Riels’ eyes shone with tears. “Since none of us could face it, we stopped trying. The garden was always cared for by the community so it didn’t feel right to hire an outside company to repair and maintain it.”
“What if we repaired it?”
“You would do that?” Mrs. Riels glanced up in surprise.
“The garden would be a new tribute to keep their memory alive.”
“Thank you.” Mrs. Riels’ eyes shone with a new light despite the tears that sparkled along her cheeks.
Over the next few months, Tanner and Jen gathered their friends and worked hard to move the fallen stone, cut back the wild growth, and restore the garden to its former state.
Finally, it was ready.
The crowd gathered before its gate whispered excitedly as they remembered the garden. A few shared stories of the young lives lost. With only a short speech, the mayor handed Mrs. Riels the scissors. The town watched as she clipped the ribbon and broke into cheers. People meandered through the gardens, several strolling hand-in-hand with their loved ones. Many paused by the memorial marker to pay their respects.
The once neglected and broken garden no one ever visited now grew vibrantly. Roses blushing with pink hues hung from carefully pruned bushes. Red fruit hung from the lone apple tree’s thriving branches. Beds of flowers in all colors covered the ground. The stone wall stood around the garden neatly repaired. A finely wrought silver gate gleamed in the sun and stood tall at the garden’s entrance. With memories no longer forgotten, people filled the garden once more.
Team A
“There once was a forbidden garden. Guarded by an old troll with green, wrinkly skin. When the little children knocked, she would yell- you cannot come in!” Finn huffed and knocked over the troll he set up on the table and it went hurtling to the floor with a thump.
May, a tot with those cute, spiky, toddler-wisp pigtails on top of her head, bent down and picked up the doll, petting its head. Then she put it in her mouth.
Finn sighed.
“May, give me that back.” he said, holding out a hand.
May shook her head no and her mouth hardened into a pout.
“Mine.”
“No, it’s mine. I need something to be Old Lady Crandall.”
“Mine.”
His little sister could be so stubborn.
“Fine. You can play with it. See if I care.”
“Finley.” His mother’s admonishing, but gentle voice carried over from the kitchen where she was cooking. “Be nice to your sister. She’s little.”
“Okay.” He got down to May’s height. “Sorry I was mean.”
“It okay.” She gave Finn a hug and he hugged her back. He couldn’t be cross at her for long. May didn’t understand his frustrations.
His mother set their pasta dinner on the table and Finn was asked to clear up his creation to make room for his plate. He did- tearing down the Lego fence and removing the dandelions he’d placed to represent the neighbour’s flower garden.
He gathered those in his hands.
“You can have them.” he said, and his mother, a slender blonde woman, set his plate on the table, picked up his sister and settled her into her high chair, and then accepted them.
Pasta was good, like usual. Finn liked it very much. What he didn’t like was the way Old Lady Crandall had looked at him as he walked past this morning on his way to school. He always stopped by her fences and always stood on his tippy toes to peek over the fence into her garden. It was real lovely in there- roses and buttercups, stone walkways, even a pond.
He liked the pond, with its splashy fountain and huge koi. He’d sometimes see frogs over the fence too. Most often, he saw Old Lady Crandall. She looked like a prune and she had a voice that scratched when she yelled. She yelled whenever she caught him watching her. She made Finn feel worse than dirt or an ant on the road.
“Finley, what’s wrong? You seem upset.”
“Sorry.”
His mom smiled and placed a hand on his shoulder.
“It’s okay to have feelings.” she said with a smile.
“Old Lad- Mrs. Crandall hates me. Today she forbid me when I asked to see her fish and garden.” Tears began to spill over, so his mother reached for her napkin and began to dab at his face, cradling him close.
“Maybe I should talk to her.”
“No.” He pleaded with his eyes. “She’ll be more mean when I walk past to school.”
“We’ll see about that. How about we go talk to her together?”
“I don’t know.”
“Some people are mean for lots of reasons. You got upset at May because you were having a bad day. Maybe she’s feeling bad because of her day.”
“Or years.” Finn muttered, a bitter note seeping into his little voice.
His mother patted his head and then directed him to eat his dinner.
The next day was a Saturday, and Finn wasn’t going to school. He was almost glad because he wouldn’t have to see Old Lady Crandall again, but then he remembered Mom’s words. Yes, they were going to see her and talk to her. Big gulp.
He put on one of his Sunday shirts just in case, and brushed his hair real nice. If she thought he was a good boy, could he see the fish?
Only one way to find out.
Finn put on a determined gaze and waved good-bye to his Dad and little sister May. Then he took his mother’s hand and they both walked down the street. Finn’s mom had a soft, warm hand, and a basket of cookies in the other. She said cookies could help anyone remember their manners, and Finn believed her. Unless some people were too cranky for cookies.
His breath hitched as they came into sight of her house, and he had a vivid picture in his head of her scowling face, but she wasn’t in the forbidden garden today.
She must be home.
Finn and his mom came up the driveway beside her car. She was home. Finn gripped his mom’s hand tighter and hid behind her once they were on the doorstep.
The doorbell chimed a beautiful sound, like church bells. What Finn was worried about was the shrill noise that would remind him he was a terrible boy. So, when the door began to open, he wished he was invisible and shut his eyes too, hoping it would work.
“Hello, Mrs. Crandall.” His mother said.
“Cheryl. Your boy’s been trying to ruin my flowers.” She said, fixing Mom and the cookies with a harsh stare that made Finn quake in his sneakers.
“I thought Finn could explain himself if you’d give him a moment.” Mom said, holding out the basket of cookies.
The old lady took them.
“Fine. Speak up, young man. Yes, I see you there.”
Finn stepped out from behind his mother. His eyes threatened to fill with tears.
“I like your garden- I wanted to visit.” He said, and then the tears came.
“Oh. Oh.” The old lady almost dropped the cookies, but managed to bend down a little, so she was looking into Finn’s face.
“You really should have just asked.” She said. “I’m so sorry. I thought you were one of the boys who threw toilet paper at my house last Halloween.”
Finn looked up into the old lady’s face and wiped away his tears.
“It’s okay.” he said.
Then they walked into the garden together.