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When Perfect Fell Apart

By the time the third groomsman started arguing with a folding chair, Elliot Dane knew this wedding was going to be special.

Not “special” like lace-and-lilies magazine spreads. Special like “someone will definitely cry in a hallway next to a fire extinguisher.” He adjusted the strap of his camera bag and surveyed the scene with the cautious optimism of a man who had already Googled “how to photograph around emotional chaos.”

Elliot had always thought of himself as a photographer. He captured what was there—light, angles, smiles that behaved. He did not, as a rule, derive meaning from disasters involving cake icing, missing rings, and relatives who argued as if it were a family tradition.

But here he was.

The bride’s mother was whisper-shouting about chair arrangements. The groom’s brother was pacing like he was about to challenge the DJ to a duel. Somewhere, thunder grumbled ominously.

Elliot snapped a picture of a flower girl solemnly eating three cupcakes at once. Frosting everywhere. No regrets. Click. Honestly? Stunning.

“Do you see this?” the wedding planner hissed, appearing beside him like a very stressed-out ghost in heels.

“I see… potential,” Elliot said, lifting his camera just as the wind whipped a veil dramatically over an arch. Click.

“Potential,” she repeated.

“Emotional potential,” he clarified.

The bride, Lila, stood in the middle of it all—still, glowing, and just barely holding it together.

Elliot approached her gently. “Hey. You okay?”

She smiled, and it wobbled in a way that felt honest. “Weddings are supposed to be perfect,” she said softly.

And then, almost like the sky was listening—

The storm came quicker than expected.

“But everything went wrong,” she added, laughing a little, even as her eyes shimmered.

Rain burst from the sky all at once. Guests scattered. Shoes were kicked off. Someone grabbed the cake as if it were a small, delicate hostage.

Elliot ducked under a tent—then paused.

Because out in the rain, something unexpected was happening.

Lila ran forward, her dress catching the rain like it was meant for it. Marcus followed, trying to shield her with his jacket and failing in the most endearing way possible.

They were laughing.

Not polite laughter. Not “we’ll laugh about this later” laughter.

Now laughter.

The kind that fills your chest and spills over because there’s nothing else you can do.

“I didn’t imagine it like this!” Lila shouted.

Marcus grinned, completely soaked. “It’s better!”

And somehow—it was.

Elliot stepped into the rain without thinking, his camera steady, his heart suddenly too full.

Click. Click. Click.

Lila looked at Marcus like the storm didn’t matter. Like the chairs, the schedule, the ruined plans—none of it mattered.

Click.

That was it.

That was the moment.

Elliot felt something shift inside him, something quiet but certain. He’d always thought of himself as a photographer—someone who stood outside moments, collecting them neatly.

But this wasn’t neat.

This was messy and loud and real and somehow more beautiful than anything he’d ever staged.

This wasn’t just taking pictures.

This was seeing.

This was understanding that perfection wasn’t in the plan—it was in the way people held onto each other when the plan fell apart.

Maybe he wasn’t just a photographer.

Maybe he was an artist.

The rain softened, like it had made its point. Guests reemerged, damp and smiling, tension washed away.

The planner appeared again. “We are proceeding,” she announced, as she had personally negotiated with the weather.

Chairs were reset. Hair was… attempted.

The ceremony began anyway.

Lila and Marcus stood together, still slightly soaked, still smiling as they’d already lived through the most important part.

Elliot lifted his camera, softer now.

Because he understood.

This wasn’t just about the ceremony.

It was about all the storm before the wedding ceremony.

The arguments that didn’t break them. The chaos didn’t scare them. The way everything went wrong—and somehow made everything feel more right.

He took the photo.

Click.

Later, editing, Elliot lingered on the messy shots—the rain, the laughter, the almost-falls.

The real ones.

He sent the gallery with a note:

“Your love didn’t wait for perfect conditions. It made something beautiful out of everything that went wrong.”

Lila replied within minutes.

“These are perfect,” she wrote. “You didn’t just photograph it. You saw it.”

Elliot leaned back, smiling softly.

For the first time, it felt completely true.

 


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@shphys I love this! Your story made me tear up. <3


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@shphys this is beautiful 🙂


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@shphys Been there as a wedding florist. You see the angst and the anger, but then the beautifully raw ones too. Lovely story!


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@shphys Love the humorous start, but then you really hit us with the emotions there at the end, great job!!!


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@shphys lovely story. Great use of detail too.


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A Bedtime Story

What story do you want, Hannah?

The Princess and the Pea.

Where is it? I don’t see it on the bookshelf.

I want you to say it. Make it funny!

Okay. Once upon a time, there was a pig…

There’s no pigs!

How do you know? The king had pigs.

Start it right, Daddy!

Okay, so once upon a time there was a king, a queen, and a prince. The prince wanted a wife but they didn’t know any ladies who were good enough to marry a prince.

They needed to find a princess. I think she was lost. That’s why they couldn’t find her.

I think you’re right. One day it rained a lot. The pigs loved it because there was mud everywhere.

There aren’t pigs in the story. It’s about a princess.

I know, but the pigs were there, too. They saw a wet lady in a fancy dress knocking at the castle door.

Why didn’t she have an umbrella?

She thought the rain was going to wait until dinner, and she decided to go on a short walk, but the storm came quicker than expected. 

She should have brought an umbrella anyway.

You are a smart cookie. 

A servant opened the door and let her stand in the hall, dripping like a raincloud. She told him that she was a princess, and that she had gotten lost. When she saw the castle, she thought it was her castle, but it was the prince’s castle instead.

Her castle is pink with yellow windows. His castle doesn’t look like that.

No, it doesn’t, but she couldn’t see very well in the rain.

What do they do?

The queen was excited to hear about the princess, but she wanted to make sure that the lady was telling the truth, so the queen came up with a test. Everybody grabbed all the mattresses they could find and stacked them up while the princess was busy drying off with a towel.

There were a gazillion mattresses!

That’s a lot. I don’t think the princess can get on top of all of those.

They have an elevator to get to the top of the mattresses.

Yeah, they used an elevator. After the princess went to bed, a pig snuck in and put a pea under the bottom mattress.

A pig didn’t do it! The queen did.

The queen dressed up like a ninja and snuck into the room. She used a pea from the vegetable garden. She saved it from the pigs–they were really hungry after playing in the rain.

No, she stole one from the chef. Then the princess couldn’t sleep on it, because she can’t sleep on stolen stuff.

She’s a good princess.

The princess was really tired in the morning. And grouchy like Mommy.

Yeah, Mom’s not a morning person.

Then the queen asked why she was tired, and the princess said that someone had put a rock in her bed and she couldn’t sleep on it. Then the queen knew she was a real princess. 

Why did that mean she was a real princess?

I think it’s because princesses can detect when stuff is stolen, like you said, so she couldn’t sleep because it made her feel bad. So then the prince knew that she was a good princess, and he married her, and they lived happily ever after. The pigs even came to the wedding, after they got cleaned off.

Pigs aren’t allowed at weddings. They would eat all the cake. 

That’s true. It’s time to get to bed now.

Did the prince and princess have any kids?

Yeah, they had a little princess, and she looked like you.

You aren’t the prince.

No, I’m the king, and I royally order you to get in bed. Good night, Bug.

I want another story. I want the Three Little Pigs.

Okay, but that’s the last one and then we’re done for the night.


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@littlewords this is sweet!!


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@littlewords Reminds me of the crazy parodies of Franklin the Turtle my Dad would concoct for us when we were bored and waiting in the van while Mom did shopping. 🤣 Good job!


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@littlewords Very cute. I love how you fit the prompt sentence in too.


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From up here, it's like the whole world belongs to me. An endless stretch of vibrant blue sea, tumultuous, brave and just as likely to drown a man as give him safe passage. And yet it is mine. My violent untamed world. The sea means freedom, means a world which I am a king of my own empire, master of tides.
"Captain, at your five o' clock!"
I glance towards my starboard, at the waves breaking over our stern, and the dark clouds billowing in the East. Not good. I snag the line to my left and descend, booted feet landing on the deck just as it swells violently and I am pitched into the mast, hand outstretched to steady myself. The sheets are snapping in a sudden wind, and salty spray whips my hair back from my face.
"The storm came quicker than expected." Renvold says, voice raised above the sound of the gale.
"It is no normal storm." There, in the center of the storm, is a greenish light. "It is the kayamanti. Our passage displeases them."
"We can take the drimalt passage, to the North. It will be longer, but---"
"No." My voice cuts through his, and I am not his oldest friend, in that moment, but his captain, and my tone brokers no further discussion. "It will take us two extra weeks. Weeks we do not have. We push through."
"I respect your decision, Captain, but I urge you to take caution."
"We have harpoons, Renvold. These men are brave, and we will not fail. We cannot."
"Cannot is only a word, Captain. Words will not save us."
I do not respond, instead calling orders to the crew and making my way to the front, on the bow of the ship and the edge of my world, staring out over the boundless sea, my eyes coming to rest on the writing mass of scales and fins in the eye of the storm. The kayamanti.
The ship swells again, and I cling to the rails, fumbling at my waist for my spyglass, extending it and pressing it to my eye. I can see them clearly now. Long sinuous bodies and angular faces, whisker-like spines and lashing tails. They are angry, and their storm flares up around us as The Patience is caught in its depths, and all is reduced to the torrent of water coming over the side, to the shouts of my crew and the screams as the kaymanti plunges up through the hull, splitting the ship into two pieces, which jerk apart, tossed in a vortex of swirling water.
My spyglass falls from my hands, lost to me as surely as any dream of making it through this night alive. I cannot see Renvold, but I can almost feel his resignation, over distance.
The kayamanti rises above me, the largest one, and in its great eye is a sort of calmness. As though it was merely doing what it had always been destined to, after all.
As it crashes down upon the ship once more, I am left only with Renvold's words echoing in my head.
Cannot is only a word. And words will not save us, in the end.

 

Because apparently I'm only capable of writing tragedies. 😅


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@journey-bloomfield that ending... Please tell me someone survives the shipwreck so you can write more stories about this? I know it's meant to be a tragedy but I already want more of this...


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The Unicorn and the Girl by SlyPigglet5 (girl, age 7.5yr, Mom helped with spelling only)

 

One day there was a girl. She was friends with a unicorn. They were playing games when she said “I have to go.” She knew that it was going to rain. But the storm came faster than she expected. She tried to go home, but instead she went deeper into the forest and she got lost! Then the unicorn came to her rescue. The unicorn carried her home on her back. The mom and dad were so worried that when they saw her they threw a party just because she returned. The unicorn and the girl lived happily ever after. 

The end


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The Duster of June 3rd

It was the winter of 1934, or at least it was supposed to be. There was no snow, no cold days, no cheery people or lights. A scraggly tree with no leaves was a sad excuse for a Christmas tree. A brown burlap sack under the tree was a sad excuse for presents. Winter eventually turned into the seasons I dreaded most. Spring and summer. Everything was so hot and dry. The worst of it all was the dust storms. They would come when you least expected them, billowing in, a big black cloud that stretched for miles. And when they hit, boy did they hit, it was like a nightmare come to life. You couldn’t see anything - not your hand in front of your face, not your family around you. You could barely see the lantern sitting on the cold cellar floor. You couldn’t breathe either. Nothing you did helped. Not a cold wet cloth or a gas mask. The dust storms would last for a few hours and then when they were over there was dust everywhere. But nothing prepared us for the storm that would hit on June 3rd around dusk.

June 3rd was a good day. The sky was blue with white fluffy clouds. We were all minding our own business doing our evening chores and routines. Then out of nowhere we saw a huge, gigantic black cloud way far off in the distance. We hustled to get everything closed - the barn, the house, the car shed, the chicken coop. We ran to get the house all closed. That storm came quicker than expected. We stuffed towels in the cracks of the door and windows, put our dinner in the dresser drawers, and booked it down to the cellar. I lit the lantern knowing it wouldn’t do any good. We dunked towels in buckets of water and tied them around our faces. We all huddled down and snuggled up in blankets.

 Then the storm hit. It was the worst of them all. It lasted for days. We couldn’t breathe. No matter how hard I tried I couldn’t breathe. Finally, there was a break in the storm, and I could get a breath. I was so hungry. It was terrible those days of the duster. We started up the stairs out of the cellar. Pa pushed and pushed, but the cellar door wouldn’t budge. I went over and helped him, but it still wouldn’t budge. Ma came over and helped push, and finally it came open. Loads and loads of dust and dirt came down and covered us. We scrambled back and pressed ourselves against the wall. The dust stopped eventually, and we slowly went up the stairs. We stopped dead in our tracks; we couldn’t go any further. The dust was pilled up so high at least to Pa’s waist. Slowly we pushed our way through the dust and turned around. What we saw made my legs turn to jelly. I slowly sank down till I was sitting on the ground. Our house was good for the most part. There were some broken windows, and the door was hanging open. But what was hanging out of the window left us speechless. There was a bloody dead body hanging out of the window. I prayed hard that we didn’t know the person. Suddenly we heard sobbing, and I froze up. Ma and Pa looked at each other. Then they rushed into the house. Slowly I got up and followed them. Back in a far corner there was a little girl. She was covered in dust and crying so hard. Ma, feeling sympathy, picked her up and carried her back down to the cellar. Me and Pa followed, finding some more matches for the lantern. Down in the cellar the little girl said her name was Betsy. She had gotten lost when the duster hit and stumbled into our house.

     We looked out for little Betsy for a while. We tried to find her family, but apparently, they had left because they thought she was dead. Thankfully we didn’t know the bloody person, but Pa buried it anyway. After weeks and weeks of cleaning we finally got the house cleaner than it had ever been. A little while later it started raining! It was just for a little while, but then it started to rain more often! We ended up adopting Betsy, and I was so very thankful for my little sister! A few years later the depression ended, and Pa got a job again. We finally got rid of all the dust in our yard and lives. What a crazy year of the Great Depression.   

 


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